Wednesday, September 17, 2008

Mission Accomplished

He was in love.
She was a shimmering haze on his horizon.
He had to know more about her.

He promised to release all her secrets
With wild kisses.
He wanted to look through her eyes
Right into the depths of her soul.
He was determined to set his heartbeat
In tune to hers,
His thoughts, as streamlets
Of her torrential mind.

Charged with passion,
He ripped off her layers in a frenzy.
And with a scream of startled pleasure,
She gave herself to him.

He drank her in,
Till her mysterious ways became eternal truths
He had known since his birth.

She shivered with joy,
At the freedom that this new nakedness gave her.

Then there came a point
When there was nothing left to discover.
He realised he was bored.

It was time to move on.

Telling her was an unenviable task,
But he did it.
And she stood silently,
Shivering as of old,
But with a slight stoop that hadn't been there before.

Nakedness was no good against the cold.

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the dreamer.... said...

this is really beautiful. True n extremey well written.
especially the portion
"Then there came a point
When there was nothing left to discover.
He realised he was bored."

really loved it

azuria said...
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azuria said...

It was really beautiful. And cold. And sent shivers down my spine.

"Then there came a point
When there was nothing left to discover.
He realised he was bored."
loved this part


Awesome work.

Death On Two Legs said...

Aakanksha, did you copy dreamer's comment and just edit it a little?!

azuria said...

o.O
nah...he/she typed exactly what I was thinking so...besides,it IS beautiful...what else can I write?

It is also kind of ethereal...
but is it my fault I like the same part he/she liked? :D :D

BTW, I didn't read dreamer's comment before :o

the dreamer.... said...

hey anushka...
dreamer is jinal
if u remember me dat is
welham's n then ln birla.

how are u
really like the way u write.

Genie said...

i empatize.
nice.

Yamini said...

the last line's a KILLER.
...you write well... *sigh*

Ash said...

Cold. Clinical. Brilliant. Beautiful.